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A star in the sky that shines so bright,
And it starts to twinkle in the night.
The children look and point above,
To the little stars that form a dove.
They form shapes and animals in the sky,
But oh dear oh my, why so high?
We try to reach them from here below,
But all they can do is give us a show.
We can try to catch them in a jar
But why must they be so far?
The stars are what bring me my delight,
As they shine along in the moonlight.
hmmmm soooo i had no idea what to put this under open. i have no idea what that means
idk
if anyone knows, let me know

but i wrote this for school. the assignment was to write about something that brings delight to you so i chose stars (:

please dont steal. the poem (c) me
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Tkaobox Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2007
aww they're in a jar ): they'll be lonely T_T

aha xD
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Pirate-Cashoo Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Ahhh, this is adorable!! You're very good. @ u@ :heart:

Lovely job, lulz. I suck at writin' poems. <3
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tsuren Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2007
thanks cashoo <3 X3333

hahaha well at least your good at something! @3@ aka drawing @3@ i suck!
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